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From: Miss Elaine Eos <Misc@*your-shoes*PlayNaked.com>
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Subject: Re: mover!
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Date: Thu, 28 Jul 2005 03:08:26 GMT
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In article <hjdFe.2662$q23.357710@news20.bellglobal.com>,
"user1" <noemail@noemail.com> wrote:
> Hi could you please give me a hand with this cover letter/email. Please let
> me know if there is any part I need to edit or rewrite if you think I should
> do so. I appreciate your help. Thanks
> ============================
>
> Hi
> I would like to apply for " Mover helper " position. I am hard working,
> reliable, mature and physically fit person. I am very good team-player and I
> enjoy working with others. I can only work for 1 day /week (8-16hrs/day).
> I know I can make a positive contribution to ABCcompany and I look forward
> in meeting you.
Gentlemen,
I am writing in response to your posting in the St. Granny's Gazette for
a "Mover Helper." I am hard-working, reliable, mature and physically
fit, and I work well with others.
I am confident that I can make a strong contribution to the ABCcompany
team, and look forward to speaking with you. Please contact me at your
earliest convenience to arrange a meeting.
Sincerely,
Yourname
your@email.com
123/456-7890 [your phone]
In a cover letter, I'd leave out any negatives like the fact that you
are only available 1 day per week. You can bring that up after they're
convinced that they absolutely must have you, no matter what.
--
Please take off your shoes before arriving at my in-box.
I will not, no matter how "good" the deal, patronise any business which sends
unsolicited commercial e-mail or that advertises in discussion newsgroups.
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