In article <4c030f74$0$12570$c3e8da3@news.astraweb.com>, insane4boyz!
<nevermind@notsaying.net> wrote:
> If so, what did you think? I'm mainly interested in your opinion of the
> sexual descriptions since I
> obviously put most of my effort into those. LOL Also, keep in mind that I've
> never writting a story before.
> :)
I did read it and I thought it was good. I said that in my reply on the
27th. Here is that message ID:
<Grant-me-that-2705101@Grant.Grant>
It looks like some text posts are not getting noticed. Maybe because of
the flood of file posts? I would like to read more of your stories but
I might not notice them myself just like I didn't notice your ping
until 4s00ths reply made it stand out more and that was after a lot of
scrolling.
Here is what I wrote in my reply to your story:
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Good story so far. I'm sorry to say I won't be downloading more. I'm in
a situation where I can't risk having those kinds of files on my
notebook computer. Not even for a second. It was stolen before and
might be again. Even though its not illegal I would lose my job if
people saw it and I would never be able to do that kind of work again.
I love my job to much to risk it.
If you post text inside the post and not as an attachment I will read
it and like it but not in a download attachment. This problem convinced
me not to write graphic sex in my stories. "Stevie" had some wild times
he told me about but I think I can't write them in too much detail now.
Stevie's next adventure story (#3) takes place when he was 10.
I don't know when I'm going to write my own other turkey story.
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I did post story #3 but you might not have noticed it. LOL
The next story is longer.
I'm not a good judge of story writing. A friend hinted I should have
paid more attention in those kinds of courses in college. Football and
ROTC were more important to me then. LOL I'm learning as I go with
this. If you want a critique why don't you ask Mover. He usually does
it without being asked. Maybe I scared him off when I told him my
opinion of that. You could ask Doc too. He writes stories well. They
write better than me.
I might not notice your reply to this if you make one. LOL
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Grant
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