In article <9a4f352cf9dcb98fb669a57da1723783@mixmaster.it>, George
Orwell <nobody@mixmaster.it> wrote:
> Hi
>
> Many thanks Grant for sharing this very interesting Stevie story named
> "The Adventures of Stevie 9", i liked this one very much, it is great
> like your others, the part about body language was very interesting,
> and the part about Stevie being strong and knowing judo and karate
> was a bit surprising, because he seemed very small, but this turns
> his stories even more interesting in my opinion because that way
> he can protect himself and possibly others against bullies like that
> Will person.
> I liked your message, and i agree with it, Stevie liked to play with
> Jeremy because he was nice and didn`t forced him to do nothing against
> his will, but Will was a diferent kind of person, that used his strenght
> to make Stevie make something that he didn`t want, so that was wrong,
> and it was good to see him expelled, it was a good message in my opinion
> because i belive that is always wrong people to make other people make
> things with them against their will, and that beside the gender or age of
> the other person. But if they agreed and are happy with it, then in my
> opinion there aren`t any problem.
> And it was good to see that Stevie learned his lesson regarding the poor
> SueAnn, and stoped squeezing her breasts, to try to get some milk, i thinked
> that part was very funny.
> Well, thanks again for posting another of your very interesting stories, i am
> liking them very much.
>
>
> Many thanks clark for posting this breathtaking series, i always liked them
> very
> much, it is a tribute in my opinion to the work of one the most generous
> persons
> that i ever saw, Johnie, i do remember that his great rem pictures were some
> of the
> first that i ever saw posted many years ago in a.b.p.b, even before i found
> the Fort,
> and his amazing work was one of the most posted during this years, so it is
> really
> wonderful to see it so complete, there were many sets that i didn`t see
> before, and
> others that i had incomplete, so it was really great to have the oportunity
> to
> complete them because of your amazing post. Beside that it is always
> wonderful to
> see his beautiful work posted again for the many people that didn`t have it,
> or at
> least didn`t have it so complete.
> Thanks again for posting so many wonderful series that i personaly enjoyed
> very much,
> like im sure that many others also did, it is always a great pleasure to see
> your
> very beautiful posts in my opinion.
>
>
> Take care and best regards
>
You're welcome.
Both the SueAnn and Will stories were true, and came from different
people, but I changed them a little. The Will story didn't have
anything sexual in it at first.
The way I write these stories is a little backward. I have the the main
story ideas already. I write them down and then I try to explain before
them how they could happen, then I explain at the end what they mean to
Stevie. Then I rewrite them so they work all together. It is this
process that made the fun story with Will became a bad thing, and the
lesson came from that.
Part of the problems with my story writing is I want to make them all
different. This is why I changed Will's part. When I start writing a
story, I don't know how it will end. Sometimes the final story version
surprises me.
The next story #10 is called "Darkness and Light". Stevie learns some
things about people and how they see things differently.
When I wrote that part up there about the next story to you, I just had
an idea for a story about prejudice and discrimination. It will be #14,
and take place in a store. Stevie will be with his father, shopping for
things to take with him to summer camp. I owe this to you, and I hope I
will make it something you will like. Thank you very much!
--
Grant
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